Fallen Angel - Comments

loved the update
can't wait for more

Oh Matt just made a mistake in my book, she might not talk to him for a good while after he gets back
but i guess it was all in good thoughts. I can understand him wanting her to stay there for her to be safe.
<3 Michele

Matt is going to get his ass kicked when he comes back.

yey your back

Update??

please update soon i miss this story

I love your story. Please update soon?

Please please update this soon its my favorite story.

just found this story and loving it
more soon?

This might sound kinda mean but you should edit your chapters. Your missing a lot of periods and you have question marks in the wrong spot in some places. This story is really cool, love the plot and I don't want your story to be reported for something that can be easily fixed. I'm really exited for the next chapter, please update soon. :)

I really like this.
Please please update soon!<3

Ok, I know I havn't commented in forever but that's because I went MIA (a7x song!) so I havn't read any of the new chapter's till now. Girl! Your on fire. I mean I have no idea on what's gonna happen....ok well obviously from the last chapter, their gonna invade the other place since Matt had the blueprints. Sooooo......yea. That's all I can even guess at LOL. But for some strange reason, I expected alil more....idk details or something that would ease Lissi and Matt's bond alil more slowly. I mean, you kinda just got it over with in my opinion. And what's gonna happen with them since they apparently got closer....does that mean no more fights or randomly strange arguments? Annnnnyyyywaaaaay, can't wait for you to update. So sorry for you getting reported. Who ever reported you needs to learn a leason in being social. You don't report someone for grammer. You just fricken tell them straight up. UGH! People these days! I mean, I can't spell all that great but that doesn't stop me from writing so no-one should be judged on their spelling or grammer unless their talking like some gangster G or some illiterate 2 year old.

End Rant. :P

I just caught up with this story and i just wanted to say that i am infatuated with this story.
Lissi's relationship with all of the guys is really intriguing, well, except for her and Syn's relationship. I would love it if they just spent time talking to each other, getting to know one another, i guess.
I noticed in one of you author's notes that you mentioned your story was reported and it having to do with spelling and grammer. While your Spelling was all good and well, I did noticed in some of your earlier chapters that you used question marks as the punctuation, when a period or exclamation mark should have been used. But other then those little things, i can honestly say that your story is amazingly well written and i hope that you don't mind me pointing out little things (I promise I don't do it often)
I can't wait for more!
<3 Michele

Love it update soon :)

i love it! can't wait for the next chapter :D

I love this story!!!!!!!!!

And I agree, there MUST be a sequel.

OH and theres got to be a sequel, just saying :L
I love Matt and Rose's relationship, it's so cute :)
I should stop writing now....

I only found this story late last night and I've already whizzed through the 22 chapters :L
please, please update soon :D
I'm addicted to this!

great chapter.
I hope there is a sequel :)

So the reason Rose doesn't want to acknowledge the bond between her and Matt is because she doesn't want to let her heart out there and have shattered by Matt.
That's why she doesn't want to get close to Matt because he might do that to her.
Like she said, if he ever did that to her, she'd probably go insane because Rose has never been intimately close with anyone at all during her teen life.
Aw her being half a asleep was so cute, not flinching away when she sat with Matt and actually letting him get close to her.
So the reason her mother went insane was because after losing Rose, her mother take it anymore because she loss her only child.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!