Comment swapper here :) I really really liked this one shot. It was very dream like and nothing broke that trance for me. It wasn't the most original but you definitely made it your own. It was very nice :3
I find it really cute, though I was expecting it to be a little more sexual in a way I guess, so I was a little disappointed, but I like it. It's really cute like I said before and it's well written. :) I hope you make another one-shot or more Avenged related things.