Simplest Mistake - Comments

ethereal. (100)

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Oh my god! This was amazing! I loved every moment, and the characters and detail. Everything was absolutely perfect. I can't even put into words how much I enjoyed this reading. It was captivating, the end was shocking, and it was just all around something interesting and amazing to read.

September 14th, 2011 at 06:46am

cruciatus. (455)

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Dasha, I have been craving to comment this since I read it when you first put it out. It was fantastic. I loved the detail and the characterization, and the description and the language and the way that you pulled everything together....Yes, I am aware that that is a run-on sentence, and yes, it's because I'm so flabbergasted at how incredible this one-shot truly was. I kept waiting for more to happen and I just...Gah, I can't honestly tell you how much I love this story.

July 2nd, 2011 at 02:59am

atrocious (100)

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Oh my. . . wow. . . just. . .

I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT ENDING WHAT SO EVER!

The detail and description was so good! I loved the entire thing, babe!

June 30th, 2011 at 05:53am

Nia_Flores (100)

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Oh... I loved this!

June 7th, 2011 at 08:09am