Life Starts Now. - Comments

She seemed rather calm for waking up in someone else's bed. Derek sounds like a real dick.

I personally like first person pov. And johnny has a point. They kinda kidnapped her.

@ mrsmshadz
Thanks for the input. I go into it a little bit more in the next chapter. Thanks for commenting!♡

I like it in first person. Good story so far, I'm not sure why a dude would beat up a girl just for the fuck of it. Anyways, can't wait for more.

No problem :)

@ shortygirl
Posting the next chapter later on today if my internet connection on my laptop will behave!
Thanks for the comment.

I really like this so far. Update soon

Well even if that was really short, sometimes it has to be like that. Short, sweet, and to the point. This story was one of the best Avenged Sevenfold stories I've ever read before. Good job on it, I'm looking forward to the sequel. <3

I thought that the story was very well written and I'm curious to see what happens with Harper and Brian, however you do need to work on your spelling and grammar a bit more. And I agree with the other people when they say that the ending was much too short and it didn't feel like much of an ending.

I thought that the story was very well written and I'm curious to see what happens with Harper and Brian, however you do need to work on your spelling and grammar a bit more. And I agree with the other people when they say that the ending was much too short and it didn't feel like much of an ending.

I thought that the story was very well written and I'm curious to see what happens with Harper and Brian, however you do need to work on your spelling and grammar a bit more. And I agree with the other people when they say that the ending was much too short and it didn't feel like much of an ending.

The ending was pretty abrupt and I would have liked to see more from Harper's point of view but am interested to read the sequel to find out what happens next.

I hope Brian gets it through his skull that his tantrum has robbed them of a friend :-(

didnt like the short ending but am excited for the sequel :)

Wow... Brian needs to go die in a hole. What the hell is wrong with him?! He was way too harsh!! Uggh... There was no need at all for him to say that to Harper, she doesn't need to listen to crap like that. Her life has been way too tough for her to deal with his outbursts. I like Brian, but he can be a major douche. I really hope Jimmy finds him and slaps some sense into him. Because that was just uncalled for. Man!
I feel sorry for Matt that Val cheated on him. I think it was a smart thing for them to break up though, I hate it when people just ignore it when their significant other cheats on them. Cheaters don't deserve another chance. That's my philosophy. Harper just needs to be happy... I feel like her life is filled with too much sadness, pain, and heartbreak. And I wish someone could fix it for her and give her something to always make her happy. I know that the guys try to do that for her, but it seems like something always happens and it ruins everything all over again... I think Harper deserves a 2nd chance at life. I really think she does. Anyways... I love this story... I really do. I love Harper as a character. She's just awesome. I love that she can find a way to push through everything that happens to her. Thank you so much for writing this story. It's absolutely wonderful. Thank you for the update. :)

OH MY FUCKING GOD! Brian is a fucking dick-sucking-fuck-head!!!! I'm going to punch him.
You made me hate Val in this. I love her in general so my mind is going into a weirdness, not really though. This isn't the first story that made me hate Val in it.
I love this, I was soooooo happy when I got the email. Update soon, or else...

maybe brian needs a good talking to. he probably doesnt realise whats its like to be alone for so long, and then suddenly have a group of people around you that want to help... its not easy!

Omfg. You updated! <3 Noooo... Harper don't think like that. Brian has some major apologizing to do. I hope to read more soon.

I HOPE SHE LEAVES AND DOESN'T CONTACT THEM, AND BRIAN FEELS HORRIBLE! BRIAN FINDS HER AND COMES ON HIS HANDS AND KNEES BEGGING FOR FORGIVENESS! Grrrrr

great update and I'm pissed off at Brian for throwing her out and for speaking to her that way, but unfortunately he has a point. He didn't deserve to have her turn on him for trying to help and I hope she doesn't go all mopey and emo again and finally realizes that these guys are her friends

I LOVE this story. You would be making my life 100% better if you would update this please lol (: