When Love is Murder - Comments

Talk about long time since I've read this story, like the new rewrite it's highly suspenseful :) can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

So forgive me for sounding homo but I think it's safe to say that I love you now.
This story is hands down one of the best I've read on here. Seriously. I'm not saying that to be nice,it's just the fucking truth.
lol like......I stayed up till 4:30 am reading this entire thing.
I really hope you continue writing this cause if not,I just might die lol.

loved it

can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

She wants him! Haha. More please.

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Bahaha Tori trying to get close to Johnny. Christ always gets the girl lmao

i can't wait for more of this one

*just realized I should have said how they "met" in Starbucks instead*

two-twelve: Okay I know I should have left comments for each chapter, but it was TOO damn exciting plot wise to do so. The descriptions for all the chapters were perfect and very well-detailed to the point where the readers were there with her watching everything happen. The details of Syn and Jimmy meeting the twins were awesome and the whole "let's leave flowers and notes too" idea is so cute. How she met Johnny was probably my favorite so far. Wondering how her meeting with Zacky will go? What's going to happen next? Their first "actual" meeting was cute and very detailed. Wondering if the remaining members will find girls too? I just have one last thing to say: WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?

I love this already, three chapters in.

It's awesome for a filler starter. I love the descriptions and the banner. Wondering what's going to happen next? Will she open it or leave it sealed?

can't wait for more

Update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love this story it's very good......Matt is mad creepy man it's ridiculous I mean he could hav approached Tori instead of sending her letters about him watching her tht just plain weird......but he still is gorgeous tho.....nd Zacky needs to get a chill pill or find someone tht he starts to care about so tht he could understand wat Matt is coming from.....I think it would be soo epic if Zacky and Tori met nd they get in this big argument nd thn Matt decides tht her nd Zacky should hav a fighting match in the gym nd Tori kicks Zacky's ass becuz she knows mixed martial arts nd boxing fuckin awesome.....can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I LOVE it so update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tori and Zacky must get into a huge fight, and Tori will kick his ass!

Update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Ahhhhhhh You Always Leave Me Hanging Please Update REALLY Soon

can't wait for more