You Could Shine So Bright - Comments

reminds me of sherlock

I’m not done yet. First off I want to mention the layout. It’s really lovely, and I adore the banner. As for the actual writing…as always, you impress me with the way you make such simple things so, so important to your characters. How you give them such impact, such power. It’s something not many writers can do, but you’ve done it in nearly everything I’ve read of yours. Of course, I’m not anywhere near being done… Anyway! I like the meaning behind the words to Patrick, and how it was gone the next day. As always, the last line tied everything up beautifully. I never have to worry about not feeling closure when I read your stories. You’ve always got closure, be it in a oneshot or a story or a drabble. Excellentness.

<3 Haven

I really love this. It's metaphors are very well-placed.

The first chapter the message was intresting ina good way.I liked how short it was