Forbidden Attraction - Comments

this is amazing(: man the hot topic seen was priceless! love this story! Update(: Zack is such a cutie..and so is Brian(: Makes me happy.

awe brian is an idiot some of the times...it's cute

Awh. Lovely! :D

i love how zack is always saying he is a pedophile. loved the update :)

Agree wit "KatieChrist" .. How dare you just stop it like that?! O:
- update soon again :D

*rolls around on the floor and whines*why must you do this to me?! Why?! How dare you leave it like that! Ugh!! This is pure torture! Torture I tell you! Unethical Brutual torture!! I NEED to know what happens next! Please? Love it girls! Can't wait to see what happens next!

ahhhh!! Sooo close! And yet... So far. He almost did it!!

Looooove the surfing! You guys are great! I was disappointed when Marcus let Brian down like that =( Work on that =) Great job guys.

i love how marcus told mr. haner that stacie had a crush on him.

Still love it!! :D
Can't wait for update :)

haha the name part was cute :) can they just kiss already please??? haha. good job girls :)

I Agree with "RavenNightmare1" it was so funny .. LOL!! :D
- And I love how she regret that she asked him about his name, in the end :D

Love it!!

"I'm not a pedophile." I muttered as Sammy bent over to tie her cleat. "Oh fuck me, I am a pedophile." Hahaha, that is funny. I can imagine that happening.

I just caught up with the story. Gods, you girls update fast! But I love it. Batman is awesome, end of story. So this was great. I loved it all, and I really like the plot and character development. Keep with the good work :)

I love this story!
The whole Batman matching thing was cute :)

I love it! :)
Can't wait for an update :)

So I was looking through the NC-17 stuff, and I kinda just clicked this because it said Synacky. First off, I'd like to say Synacky is NOT just a story with Zacky and Brian. Synacky is Zacky and Brian BEING TOGETHER. If they have different love interests, and aren't interested in each other, it isn't Synacky. However, with that being said, I like the way you've incorporated Michelle into the story, because there aren't many stories where she isn't just, y'know, Brian's girlfriend or Brian's ex. She actually has a purpose in this story. I like your characters and the way their personalities show through, but I think you have a long way of development to go. I also really like how your main characters interact with each other. So the only things that I can see wrong are that it ISN'T a Synacky, as you so wrongly described it, and there are a few punctuation/grammar errors. I think I'll be subscribing anyways though :D

Yay first real comment! Omg girls I love it! I'm loving the way everything is described. I'm loving all the humor. I'm loving the other best friend :) I'm just in love with it and I can't wait to read more! Which should be very soon,right??

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