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  • Aria T'Loak

    Aria T'Loak (150)

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    This oneshot scares me with its intensity.

    The layout just helps with the entire tone/mood of the thing, and it…it’s scary. I mean, it’s lovely. I love the banner and the colors. But it really sets the mood.

    Again, I can’t get over how powerful and intense your writing is. I love your metaphors and the raw emotion. And it’s hit so close to home; I connected with it…like I’ve never done with anyone’s writing before. And that’s really saying something, because I’ve felt like a few oneshots have reached me that way, but they haven’t, not like this one.

    Can’t…even…begin to describe…

    Not going to try.

    Utter perfection.
    August 18th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • waves wash

    waves wash (155)

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    First comment!
    This
    is
    emotional
    but good
    July 14th, 2011 at 06:26am