Youth and Whiskey - Comments

FallenCreature (100)

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Incredible<3
I love your songfics ^.^

December 13th, 2012 at 07:12pm

Sockii (100)

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I don't know if I've said this yet, but I love all of you songfics! : 3
And I can't wait for more! ^___^

June 26th, 2011 at 06:19am

Ren_rum (200)

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Thank you, the lyrics are part of the song fics though.

June 25th, 2011 at 05:59pm

visions_of_blasphemy (100)

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This was a pretty good story, though I think that the use of lyrics between paragraphs might draw the attention away from the actual story. Sentence structure could use a little work, and there were a couple commas left out, but other than that, it was good! I think you definitely have potential.

June 25th, 2011 at 05:58pm