True Bliss - Comments

God, I love this. It's so -real-. And "Bliss" is my favourite word :) going to read chapter 2 now...

this is amazing! i love this story so much, im so glad i decided to click on it! i was instantly captured by your awesome first chapter. you're an amazing writer, i can't wait to see what happens. :D

First of all, let me say that Jackson and Michayla are totally cute and the way that you write their relationship is so real. They have a great chemistry and the dialogue is written so well. They're good souls who want to make the world a better place, and that's certainly an interesting aspect of the story that drew me in. I haven't read an angel-centric story on here that took that direction, and you're doing it very well.
Your writing is very clear and easy to read while still being super interesting. I'm curious to see if Jackson and Michayla are going to give in to those human emotions, seeing as how much they already love each other, and what'll happen to the mayor. Awesome story. :D

WOO! more more please?! :D

Thanks so much Natalayy... I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

And by the way, Disturbed is an awesome band(:

I absolutely ADORE this story. I literally almost laughed til I cried at their banter(: The grammar was a little bit distracting, but I would be absolutely HONORED if maybe you would let me edit it for you? Message me and let me know, because you have an absolutely AMAZING story going(:

Thank you for pointing out the error, I believe I have fixed it :) (The deicision was made after the first 3 chapters were written, to change the name of the characters)

Did you realize that you switched names of one of the characters? In the first chapter, the girl's name is Sara. Beyond that, I think you have a very interesting concept going on here. I find it interesting that they are being vengeful without really thinking about it as vengeful. It makes me rather curious.

aww, that was really sweet. i loved it! i can't wait to read more. i don't have much criticism, just some grammatical errors, but honestly that's no big deal :D nicely done!

don't worry about any bashing, i assure you we're all nice here! you just need experience, and you'll definitely get that! you're already pretty awesome (:

This is my first attempt at a romance story, so please go easy :)