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  • Synful Shadows

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    They found her! :O Not good, but maybe it'll mean Brian will stop killing other women. But now I want to know what was meant by Reed being the last masterpiece, and then when Riley will make the connection between the two cases. Great update! :D Can't wait for more!
    January 1st, 2012 at 07:28pm
  • shortygirl

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    No they found her.....loved the update
    January 1st, 2012 at 07:07pm
  • saint james.

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    I really like this story it has a very unique story line. I wonder what is going to happen now that they have Simone I can not wait to see how both her and Brian react. I feel bad for Simone because she tried so hard to get rid of her past and start over but your past always come back to haunt you. I can not wait to read more please please please update very very soon!!
    January 1st, 2012 at 09:42am
  • Synful Shadows

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    I like Riley. Just started the case, and she's already figured out a pattern and that the killer is a male. But I'm curious why her name seemed familiar to Jimmy, I'm assuming Danny called Jimmy. Can't wait for an update! :D
    November 10th, 2011 at 07:51pm
  • shortygirl

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    Hmmm i wonder why this case is so close to Riley
    November 10th, 2011 at 05:54pm
  • MamaZ

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    I like this Riley chick, she's smart, cute and seems to know what the hell she is doing.
    November 10th, 2011 at 12:33pm
  • Star Angel

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    update soon love this
    October 18th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • MamaZ

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    This is going to be so freaking good! All the blood and gore is wonderful and I just love how dark Brian is.
    October 17th, 2011 at 11:04pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    Just, wow. I'm loving this. It's definitely one of my favorite stories on this site, and I've only read the one shot and this chapter. I'm so excited to read more of this! :D
    October 17th, 2011 at 07:27pm
  • avenging angel

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    D: Brian is so demented!!!! He kills girls for fun and stuff. Poor Simone she has synyster gates carved into her body forever!!! The elements making up this story are pretty much dark and evil I think but it's good because it very interesting!!! :O haven't read a story like this in a while!! So I am very much looking forward to the next update!!!!!!!! Plz do it soon!:)
    October 17th, 2011 at 06:50am
  • shortygirl

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    I like this so far
    October 17th, 2011 at 02:36am
  • fightobreakthechains

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    wow i loved the one-shot im glad you made it a story i can honestly say i have never read a story like this, anyway i cant wait for another update and see where you take this...
    October 17th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • XylonYuuka

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    Amazing :D I loved the one-shot and now i'm loving this!
    Thank you so much for making a sequel!!!
    Please continue the great work :D
    October 17th, 2011 at 02:03am
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