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  • purple haze.

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    This is a gorgeous piece. I love how you show his love and dedication to the music, and you make such a simple thing really powerful. I liked your use of language, and your style is lovely.
    Great job!
    June 30th, 2011 at 10:36am
  • decidophobe

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    and now i feel like a dumb fuck because i just realized it was a one-shot -.- so ignore the can't wait for more part.... haha.
    June 30th, 2011 at 10:08am
  • decidophobe

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    you have a way with words. i clicked on your story randomly and was going to exit but when i started reading i couldn't stop. it was great:) i'm subscribing and i can't wait for more!
    June 30th, 2011 at 10:02am
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