Hopeless - Comments

oh lordy Mr V handled that as well as a sledge hammer to the head. I hope Em hasn't done something she will regret later on.

I don't want to see her leave but then again it could be interesting to see Mr V grovelling

Wow it was false... Wow.
I hope Vengeance's "mad ass sex skills" keep Emma in HB for a little while longer but then when the guys go on tour she leaves for the job. Then after I don't know *shrugs*

Anywhoo!! This is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! But until then... ^_^

Dude you and your cliff hangers.
I mean I know a story needs suspense but come on!
So good

noooooooooooo she can't leave! they've been through so much already

oh dear i think my hair just jizzed haha hair jizz but zackys mad sex skills better work

I don't want her to go becuase Zacky will be upset, but I want to see what would happen if she left....gosh I don't know which I would rather happen.

As much as I want her to stay, I think she'll leave. What Zack said was harsh as hell and I think she just wants time to figure things out and just make a name for her self maybe

Oh. My. God. What the fuck just happened? She was pregnant, and then she wasn't and now she's leaving but Zacky's distracting her with sex! Gosh, that's a lot to handle. But I wouldn't be able to leave Zacky, with his amazing eyes, good looks, charming personality, and come on, the fucking sex. Who could leave that? Oh, and about the unicorn, is that getting shipped, or do I have to arrange for it to be picked up?

She is probbbbbaably going to leave, regardless of how great his skills are ;] haha.
Great twist, for sure.

OH MY SKITTLES this was mind blowjobbing XD lol i cant believe she took the job and is leaving =O an YAY pet unicorn xD

So wow, this story is pretty fantastic. It moves rather quickly, but with how you've developed your characters it somehow works. I kind of saw the pregnancy thing coming, but I like what you've done with it. Now my question is whether it actually was false positive like the doctor said or did she go to a clinic? Because that would be such a great twist, and explain her overwhelming need to run away (not to mention long-term repercussions of the whole procedure). I mean, sure she ran away from her ex before, so I guess you could say it's what she does, but at the same time...who runs away from ZV?! Haha.

Man, I thought this story was just going to be them hooking up but now you've gone and thickened the plot! *dun dun dun* I want to see where this goes. I'm willing to bet that she's going to leave, not only because it's kind of part of who she is, but because Zacky was a real asshole about the pregnancy thing, and he has to realize her leaving is partly because of that. There are boyfriends who do that, but seriously? He needs to be smacked upside the head. So hurry up! No more cliff hangers!

Yay they are finally together(for chapter 26) and oh dear gawh. She pregnant what they going to do.??! ....;.;…… p.s I went and watched the lion king in3D yeah I couldn't stop thinking about the "lion pose" ha

AHHHH!! More cliff hangers ? Seriously ? ughhh ! Well love the new twist anyway :D

ooh wasn't expecting that. Hopefully Z's happy and doesn't flip out.
Now write soon coz I hate cliffhangers lol

Awww shit.

Please be happy damn it! You have to be happy!! Or she'll leave for that new job

Ooooooh wasn't expecting that....but I liked it!
I hope he doesn't react badly.

HEY! I decided that I had to comment (even though I had already planned on it) since in your last author's note you mentioned stallion duck.
And my name is stallion duck.
And therefore I feel like we, and anyone else who understands the 'stallion duck', have a connection.

So, without becoming even more creepy, I completely adore this story. So much so that I finished 27 chapters in about an hour. You are a beast. Nuff said. =]

I was not expecting a baby, totally caught me off guard. But I like babies... they're funny. Also they're pretty cute. So I'm totally open to the whole baby thing, it's going to be the coolest fucking fictional baby. :)

I think Vengeance is gonna be stoked he's gonna be a daddy. Or he will be pissed and bitch at Em but, then later he's gonna be stoked. He's gonna be stoked either way. But I wish they would stop staring at each and say some-fucking-thing.

Anywhoo!! This is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read Vengeance's response!!!! But until then... ^_^