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  • Out of Sight.

    Out of Sight. (100)

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    I really liked the story. I liked how you foreshadowed her anger by using the Jersey Shore people as an example. I also liked how I felt the anger that the girl felt. It was a well written story.
    July 6th, 2011 at 05:07am
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