Teenage Dirtbag - Comments

I found the writing style of this and the story, in general, to be interesting. I enjoyed the layout as well, since it was easy on the eyes as well as being pretty :) I kinda wish we knew more about the person who's point of view this is in... Unless I just read too quickly - which is possible - I don't even think we know the gender of the person, let alone their name, hah.. But I like this story :)

i still love this story<3

First of all, the layout is quite darling even if the background colors do not initially go with the focal image. The contrast though is quite lovely, and it is not distracting in anyway which is nice.

While I'm not too of the large font (coming from a person who writes very tiny) or the length of the summary, I must say you definitely showed the reader the raw personality of the main character. He reminded me of many of the males in my own school, especially his mouth so to speak, and how he describes the people around him. Not only that, but I find myself curious about this girl he is speaking of and why he thinks so negatively of her and what happened to her.

You definitely have a clear writing style, and I can hear your voice in this so far, if that makes sense. Lovely summary, I'll probably read it tomorrow:) (very late over here)

i like it :) its very interesting. could you check mine out? xx

yay another update!

Your style of writing is definately the most creative and unique style I've ever read (:
This sounds interesting so far, can't wait to see how it will turn out ^_^

Wow I honestly cant wait for this!

oh wow this is really interesting, i love it already :D

I like your writing style. Can't wait to see what happens :)