You Know I Make You Wanna Scream - Comments

EVIL, YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY EVIL! YOU CAN'T END A CHAPTER LIKE THAT!!!!!! I was so happy that Brian woke up until the tail end of this chapter!!!!! Another awesome chapter though, I can't wait for more! :D

Brian you dick I can't believe he did that...nothing excuses what he just did

Brian you dick I can't believe he did that...nothing excuses what he just did

NO! NO! NO!!!! NOT MY SWEET BRIAN!!! WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH HIM?!?!? I'm heartbroken!!! This can't be happening!!! I REFUSE to believe he would do something like that to her!!!!

Oh my God...

That cliffhanger was just plan wrong...I was glad that Brian was awake until I got to the end of the chapter, even though I can see why he's so angry and drunk all the time it still in no way justifies anything that just happened in that last chapter....just saying

Opinion aside, yet another great chapter guys...keep em comin!!!

How do you pronounce Noemi's name?

Omg update soon!!!! I'm so worried!!!

Please update soon I wanna know what happens

Of meant home instead of hope

Im glad she gave Knox a hope even though im sure she probably won't tell him what really happened...JImmy moved his leg!!!!
You are evil woman how could you just leave us hanging???

I hate you right now! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON WITH BRIAN!!!!!!!! What happened to Zacky anyway??? Zacky is an ass in this story but I NEED to know what has been going on with him.
Great chapter though, but your cliffhangers are going to be the death of me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my God! You evil little person you! That cliffhanger! I have no words! :O

Been a while since I've commented... Anyway, I love the story it's going amazing!!!! Now that I'm all caught up I have one quick question. What happened to Zacky?!
Haha I know he's a douche and all but Ive been wondering what his sick mind has been up to?
Great story so far! And I understand why Naomi is so upset with Nattie.
She basically killed the woman who has a child and now that child has no parents. She just helped Naomi save Brian so Addi can have two parents. Just because the hoeface threatened her family doesn't make the situation very different. Now that little boy has to grow up with no parent. What if that hoe was also in a mob and the son grows up to seek revenge? That's bad karma on Nattie's part.... Haha great story (:

I love it and I so can't wait to read more! your a very good wrighter and I love your story plot

If Brian doesn't wake up then there will be a problem....Addi needs her papa

How can she even be pregent again...
I feel bad for her

Oh gosh nattie killed her, that's kind of harsh don't cha think?

....wow

She killed her?!?!? OMG... I really thought she wouldn't do it!!!