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  • Mogar.

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    I'm honestly not a big Justin fan. I don't really like him at all. But so far, what I read of the story it is really good. I must say though, your layout is a bit...it's hard on the eyes. The black with bright blue lettering. Also your title coloring for "Love is Hard" is a bit too dark and you can't see it. But really good so far. I should continue reading now.

    I think your main character might need a bit more developing, a bit more personality. You make the story go a little fast in certain parts. You skip in weird places and it doesn't flow correctly. It's nothing to stress over, but it does make it a little hard to mesh together in my head, personally.

    Please excuse this, for some reason comment swap thinks it's funny not to acknowledged that I commented. The story is good. I did finish it. Keep writing, love. ♥
    October 19th, 2012 at 04:37pm
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    July 21st, 2012 at 10:09pm
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    July 7th, 2012 at 04:18am
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    July 7th, 2012 at 04:15am
  • MrsHemmo.

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    Hello! Newcomer, here. I love Justin Bieber; he is such a sweetheart. I just finished Chapter 6 and am totally hooked. I'm hoping to finish it all in one sitting. To the person who told you this could never happen, IT'S CALLED FANFICTION. Of course situations are going to be completely coincidental and unrealistic because it's FICTION. This story so far is great, and Ava is a good momma. I'll let you know what I think when I finish :)
    January 12th, 2012 at 06:45am
  • help me mcr!

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    :) this story makes me happy
    November 29th, 2011 at 02:53pm
  • help me mcr!

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    :))) love it sooo much!!
    i want to read more. :(
    November 23rd, 2011 at 09:07pm
  • june1998

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    this is amazing ....i really wanna read more...update soon please!!!<333
    November 21st, 2011 at 02:57am
  • june1998

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    omg this is soo good update soon please!!!<333
    November 6th, 2011 at 03:59pm
  • june1998

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    this is really good update soon please!!!<3333
    November 4th, 2011 at 01:53am
  • Jada_Kins

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    Why Didnt Justin Say Somethng , He Just Walked Away . Smh .

    Anyway Loving This Story , Update ! :)
    November 1st, 2011 at 11:44pm
  • june1998

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    this is the best its friggen amazing update soon please !!!<33 im in love ....<3
    November 1st, 2011 at 09:22pm
  • june1998

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    this is amazing update soon please!!!<333
    October 24th, 2011 at 01:56am
  • june1998

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    love it update soon please!!<3333
    October 11th, 2011 at 09:51pm
  • june1998

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    amazing update soon please!!!<333
    October 6th, 2011 at 12:59am
  • TessAnh18TW

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    Lucky no school! I have to leave for school in like an hour.
    August 26th, 2011 at 01:28pm
  • TessAnh18TW

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    Ooooohh oooohh!!! I love this story!! I am subscribed!!!
    August 25th, 2011 at 10:48pm
  • christina.ashlyn

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    working on a chapter but won't be able to update and i am going away this weekend. so i might update monday. most likely will update monday.
    August 20th, 2011 at 06:26am
  • dreamgirl13

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    I love the story but it's kinda sad she isn't really with her daughter anymore...Can't wait for the next update!
    August 10th, 2011 at 07:36am
  • peaceluv4eva

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    amazing update!
    August 10th, 2011 at 12:12am
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