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  • Carry On Winchester

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    its really just her. like she has that DID, displaced identity disorder? like, i don't know if you've read it, but identical by ellen hopkins?
    idk that's what i'm gathering. haha idk if this is your direction but it makes sense for Sydney to think she has a twin when she really doesn't.
    August 8th, 2011 at 04:50am
  • strangers in bars.

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    cliffhanger?! dammit! :') i love the way you write and i can't wait to hear her story. i feel like i can just throw myself into the story and be in george's shoes and being angry at sydney and i can feel sydney's desperate attempts to be george's friend, and agh! i just love it. never change. <3 and update soon!
    August 8th, 2011 at 04:40am
  • cupcakelushyou

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    I love this. :) it's absolutely adorable and amazing in every way.
    August 6th, 2011 at 07:34am
  • And_Lucy_Loves_Me

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    So if her sister isn't in the files does that mean she's like not a witch? Anways, update soon please!!!!!
    August 5th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • DemonAngel14

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    OMG you updated! Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love love love! I want to read more. :DDD Can't wait!
    August 5th, 2011 at 05:00am
  • PirateWolf17

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    Update! I'm eager to read more!!
    August 5th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • Green Raspberries.

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    Okay so my heart literally jumped when I saw that you updated!
    August 4th, 2011 at 07:51pm
  • Carry On Winchester

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    OH BOY OH BOY THE PARENTS!
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:45am
  • FluffyGoldFish

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    Loved your update :)
    August 4th, 2011 at 07:18am
  • noski

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    you have chapter nine uploaded twice :X
    August 4th, 2011 at 06:20am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    AND THE PLOT THICKENS WITH A CONFUSING LEFT FIELD TURN!
    and i wonder what is going to happen next....
    oh boy.
    August 2nd, 2011 at 09:00am
  • Nialls Freckles

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    So, I just spent a couple of days reading this all, and I really enjoyed all of it!
    I cannot wait for you to update this story, please do so soon!
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:32pm
  • noski

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    i knew that something was up with that sydney chick! lying about being a twin to george?! he's going to be heartbroken! :(
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:03pm
  • DemonAngel14

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    You are an amazing writer. I love the humor and emotion you put into each chapter. It makes you feel as if you are right there with them. I keep waiting for the movie, but then I realize its an original fiction, and that there won't be one. You are the first author on my favorite author list. I've read many Harry Potter original fictions, but yours is one of the best I've read.
    August 1st, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • PirateWolf17

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    Not likin' Elise all that much any more. she needs to leave George and Sydney alone. maybe the Lake family doesn't WANT people to know about Victoria! Who knows! she just needs to mind her own buisness. *sigh* rant over. Update! i love it!
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:17am
  • FluffyGoldFish

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    Loved the update! Your story is beautiful :)
    August 1st, 2011 at 06:32am
  • PirateWolf17

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    Love this! And i love how you put the title into the story, or vise versa. Update!!
    July 30th, 2011 at 03:16am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    omg. i was mid-chew on my pringle while reading the line "of course, one didn't" oh myg od. but YAY SYDNEY'S GONNA HELP GEORGIE!
    you needed a peppy acey comment, so I give you, peppy acey comment.

    and thank you for reminding me that i have a month til school. :| laaaame.
    July 29th, 2011 at 05:22pm
  • I've Lost My Mind

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    Can't wait to see how George takes things, and, as for the end (in your A/N), that was my reaction too when I realized how close summer was to ending!
    July 29th, 2011 at 06:06am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    Awe she'll help them and they'll fall in love:)
    July 29th, 2011 at 04:58am