Flutterbys - Comments

Fantastically written! Sentence length is varied, which keeps my interest haha. Also, the concept is sweet. :)

I adored this story. I liked the concept of the 'flutterbys' being stronger, colourful butterflies. The idea that the flutterbys only flap around because of one person was both cute and realistic. The final line was so sweet and a perfect way to end the story, in my opinion.

Aww, this is so cute and sweet, and at the same time it's very well-written. :) The way you described the emotions and feelings was lovely. It's so relatable, too. Great job. :D