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  • RonnieRadke

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    Has this story been abandoned? D'x
    January 30th, 2012 at 09:59pm
  • RonnieRadke

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    I MISS THIS SHIT DDD'x
    September 25th, 2011 at 04:56am
  • RonnieRadke

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    Holy fuck. How had I not seen this story before now?
    This has got to be the most amazing Ronnie fic I've ever read.
    It's very well written, and the plot is fantastic.
    I'm definitely subscribing.
    Update soon?
    xx
    August 31st, 2011 at 11:26am
  • Just.A.Cupcake.Lover

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    that was hilarious! i knew as soon as he answered the phone something ridiculous was going to come out and he'd regret it.
    loved it can't wait for more!
    August 31st, 2011 at 10:09am
  • Kylene

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    i was cracking up that entire chapter.
    fantastic update:D
    you must update again soon!
    August 29th, 2011 at 01:19pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    That was a great chapter and not just because Penny and Ronnie finally had sex. But that was awesome too. ;)
    I wonder what will happen when Ronnie goes on tour.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    August 22nd, 2011 at 01:43am
  • Just.A.Cupcake.Lover

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    this story is absolutely spectacular. I don't know why you don't have more stars and more comments.
    there are so many great things about this story, mainly though it's very well written.
    i adore this and i am most definitely subscribing!
    can't wait to read more!!!!
    August 11th, 2011 at 12:02pm
  • laddi

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    Oh this story is hot! Please update!
    August 9th, 2011 at 07:45am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Oh thank you for telling me that haha. I really was thinking that you were going to end the story soon. But now I'm like 20 kinds of curious as to what you have planned for the rest of the story. I can't wait to see what you have planned.

    God damn, you really do know how to write a great chapter.
    I found pretty much the whole chapter really cute. Ronnie and Penny are just so sweet together.
    And that naughty bit on the roof of the library was great haha. ;)
    Can't wait for the next update.
    August 5th, 2011 at 07:43am
  • slk41

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    In reply to MarriahShadows, I am NOT planning an ending soon. I have some drama up my sleeve and some loosely planned events that won't take place for a while.

    Thanks for commenting, everyone! Your encouragement makes me want to write more!
    August 3rd, 2011 at 03:06pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Ah, such a great chapter, had me smiling. :)
    I'm glad Penny and Ronnie decided to stop being stupid and admit their feelings for one another.

    “Then I’ll go to class with you and help you study!” Ronnie said definitively. “Please, Penn? I miss you. I just want to spend some time together,” He pouted, laying on the charm.
    That was my favorite part. Ronnie's just too freaking sweet.
    I just love this story to bits but I get the feeling that it's ending soon, I'm not sure why. Just a feeling.
    Are you ending it soon?
    August 3rd, 2011 at 09:03am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Why? Why would Penny suggest they forget the previous night?! Fucking ridiculous.
    They're killing me!!!
    Ronnie, take fucking charge, kiss Penny and admit you're in fucking love with her!!
    Penny, get over your insecurities and tell Ronnie that you love him!!!
    Okay, I think it's absolutely freaking adorable that Ronnie's all possessive about teaching Penny the ways of pleasure and how he thinks of her as his already. :)
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    (Also, I still can't believe more people aren't commenting on this. Such a shame.)
    August 1st, 2011 at 10:48am
  • santi santi

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    I just started to read your story, and I am in love with it. I really adore Penny and Ronnie's relationship. I wish he would have told her how he felt, though. I felt really bad for him in the last chapter.

    And your author's note made me giggle :)
    August 1st, 2011 at 09:21am
  • escapemyownfate

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    Honestly..... I freekin LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 1st, 2011 at 09:07am
  • Kylene

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    i feel like a jerk for not replying in such a long time.
    i love this story, it's one of the most decent Ronnie stories I've read(:
    this chapter was sort of sad, i got a little upset in the end, especially for Ronnie.
    Update, update, update(:
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:49am
  • MarriahShadz

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    "Ohh baby" is right!
    Damn, I didn't think they were going to go that far.
    Not that I'm complaining they did haha, cause I'm not. ;)
    I just wonder what the morning will bring for Penny and Ronnie.
    Can't wait for the next update.
    July 21st, 2011 at 06:42am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Two updates in two days, kinda feels like Christmas, you know? :)
    I loved that Ronnie acted without thinking and just kissed Penny, but now I'm worried about what will happen next
    Will Penny even remember that they kissed? Or will she pretend that she doesn't remember?
    Update soon please?
    I really am loving this story.
    July 19th, 2011 at 02:52am
  • MarriahShadz

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    I'm totally loving this story.
    I love how the pace of events isn't too fast or too slow, but set moderately which makes it seem more realistic.
    And I agree with singmealaugh, there aren't too many decent Ronnie stories on here and I think you're doing a fantastic job.
    Looking forward to the next update.
    July 16th, 2011 at 08:54am
  • Kylene

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    i adore this story:D i can't believe i'm only your second comment. that's pure blasphemy & i agree with xXBreakAwayPunk96Xx. i love ronnie & there aren't very many decent stories about him around here & your blows all of those away. you should definitely continue(:
    July 16th, 2011 at 08:04am
  • xXBreakAwayPunk96Xx

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    hmm. no comments after 5 chapters? That doesnt seem fair. -___-* haha, well, i wanted to say i think you should continue *cough* cause i love Ronnie *cough* haha. but seriously, i like it alot. :) definately subscribed.
    July 11th, 2011 at 09:07am