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April 22nd, 2012 at 10:04pm
When Life Doesn't Give You Enough Cards to Play the Game, You Deal - Comments
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Lov <3April 21st, 2012 at 11:56pm
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Oh yeah!
P.s..i tried to delete the comment but it won't let me.January 22nd, 2012 at 07:58pm -
OMG! Her dad should end up coming and forcefully take her home.
And coincedentally, as her father drags her into the house and Chance and Jack are driving by....Orrrr! to lenghten it you could show her in the aunts for a few chapters, and how much she misses Chance. THEN her father shows up, and her Aunt doesn't know about her father..(I think)......well if she doesnt, no one tells her. then have her at her house, locked in a room or whatever, and her fathers abusibg her, brutally....She escapes her bonds while her fathers at the bar, and tries to escape....however, as she leaves, Vhance and Jack notice her......Then her father shows up..Her father puts up a front and acts sweet, and shit....he tells them how happy he is he just found his daughter, and how she just sits and mops in her room. And hers surprised shes even out of her room. ....The entire time, She keeps her head down and avoids eye contact out of fear. Chance asks to speak to her privately for a moment, the fathers hesitant, before he allows it 'he whispers to her "You better not fuckin say anything or I'll(Insert brutal punishment) " They talk, Chance asks her whats going on, and she lies and tells him some bullshit . Anyway...thats a good 4 chapters....If you need any help inbox me :)December 18th, 2011 at 01:06am -
is this....is this the endDecember 11th, 2011 at 06:19pm
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YEA!! update..and a long one. I wonder what their gna do bout JaredDecember 3rd, 2011 at 12:21am
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I love this sotry!!!
Add more...
You should have her dad comeback or something along those linesNovember 15th, 2011 at 02:44am -
i keeeell you if you kill chance!!!!!November 13th, 2011 at 05:45am
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<3 <3 <3November 13th, 2011 at 03:35am
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This story is amazing... dont let chance die... I will never forgive you if you kill him ='''(
Please update soooon =DOctober 31st, 2011 at 06:49pm -
i never red the twilight series but that was such a great thing to say at a time like that.October 29th, 2011 at 01:10am
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I love how you said "And Bella Swan said it was peaceful" haha . I litterly laughed.October 27th, 2011 at 06:22am
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Most DEFINITELY Team Chance :DAugust 27th, 2011 at 09:26am
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Team chance!August 25th, 2011 at 10:15pm
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Definitely Team Chance! XDAugust 20th, 2011 at 01:47pm
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This is honestly one of the best stories I've ever read, keep up the good work!August 3rd, 2011 at 09:25pm
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Okay, I LOVED this, I want Chance all to myself and you better write more soon ^^July 12th, 2011 at 01:59am
