I really, really enjoy this one. I like the way that you've characterized the boys. Most people don't really give them all different personalities and they tend to blend together, but you've got different ways that each of them speak that you talk about in your descriptions and it definitely came a long way from what you'd written back in 2008.
I LOVED IT SO MUCH! Ugh. You knowi love feisty Josh. I mean, if that wasn't obvious... ;) Loved this. I was worried there wasntgoing to be a happy ending but there was and UGh! Loved it. :3 <3
ON TO THE NEXT ONE