Simple Kind of Life - Comments

I love it. I'm so glad his mom threatened him because if she hadn't i'm afraid he might of run off. I really hope he keeps his promise to her ex about how she wont go back to him. I almost died when i saw two updates.

Loved it :) Fantastic work, and can't wait for the next update!

I like that Jeff's mom kinda busts his chops on his previous choices in women. And I also like that she and Avery were able to talk honestly and bond. That Avery could understand that it probably wasnt easy for Jane to read about Jeff's exploits on the internet. And that Avery, despite being responsible for two children, has provided stability in Jeff's life. What mom wouldnt love that!!

But I also love that everything is not perfect - that Lili does throw a bit of a fit - in response to Aaron's (Airhead...love it) teasing. They are real. And I think Jeff is really finding his role in this unorthodox but successful little family!

Looooooooved it woman! Keep up with the extra super spectacular work! I still love Lili! Jeff as a TMNT...XD SO perfect! It's nice to know that my friends (*cough*Lasairiona*cough*) and I read the same stories XD

Great update .

“I used to tell the kids if they were misbehaving out in public, I could take them into the ladies’ room and no one would hear them scream. Jeff was horrified of the ladies’ room.”

Sweet mother of pearl, I'm glad no one was around to hear me laugh when I read that. Pretty close to my own childhood memories. I know that feel, bro. I know that feel.

I love this chapter very funny

Oh My Gosh How I Have Missed You And This Story.
Gosh. I hate James. I've hated him since you said he hit her. But to see Jeff get defensive over them and want to protect them and seeing him make long term plans is great. I love it a lot. I really am glad to see this back up. I can't believe he got her Tickets to the museum and the kids are going to Disney. I'm glad Cruz likes Jeff or at least it appeared that way. I hope Jeff says i love you soon. But i know you it will come in good time.

YES I MISSED YOU, SILLY! Go Kings <3 I knew they would win :3 I love this chapter! James is a jerk -.- But Jeff and Avery are so cute! I love Squeaks, and Cam is so right :) Keep it up! Miss you dahling!

Just started reading this and I adore it!

What a douchebag.
I'm pretty sure Jeff is in it for the long haul, and I hope he proves that he is.

Great update. It appears Jeff is going to have to watch his back James wants his family back. Cant wait to read what you have planed

great update!! jeff's present to avery was amazing and you can just tell he is totally in this for the long haul. I, too, was overjoyed with the Kings win. I'm from CT and was rooting for them b/c of Jonathan Quick. hopefully i'll get to see the cup this summer!

So glad you updated! Love this story!!

Awesome update!!

Love it!! Can't wait for more!!

I'm enjoying this story, I realized I hadn't commented yet! Also I love seeing Cam again, I like her giving Jeff hell. *g* which he deserved!! you better make that up to Avery, Jeff!

I love it...please write more

I love it...please write more

I adore these two. And Lili. And Aaron. Just the whole gang!!! :-)