Oh my gawd, Dru! You are brilliant with your words. I'm pretty sure I have already said that a billion times before, but I am saying it again. I love how you bring out Brendon's caring, loving personality in this story, while you bring out Ryan's isolated, guarded personality. I was definitely not expecting the end, it was so original. You didn't make it too lovey dovey, or obvious that Ryan loves Brendon back. Which I certainly hope that he does. I love you and your writing!
Funny because of the picture I spent the entire time reading it expecting them to go outside in the rain, and then Brendon suggested it, but they still didn't go outside. Because Ryan didn't want to, because it was raining. Like he doesn't want to get married. Such a lovely little bit of symbolism.
- Charlie.