I really appreciate the comment, too :3 I'm glad you caught onto the little things. Yeah, any smut scene I write will be rooted in an emotional way of some kind; I don't like the hit-it-and-quit-it hookups in stories, usually. Ahahhaha, thank you so much.
Okay so I am finally sitting myself down and giving this a proper reading, and comment. The description of everything in the first three paragraphs is amazing.I love how you then at the end of it almost fully described Frank, picking him out as the main character. It's amazing how it's not just a quick get drunk and fuck for the first time type of fic, I love the history between them and the main reason that they stay in each others company. All I can say for the next.... ummmm while.... it STEAMY!!! I liked it... why didn't I finish it like forever ago? I love how Frank isn't called Sexy, or Hot or any of that he is just simply called pretty. Great work my dear
Pisses you off? How?? xD Anyway, thanks a million. I'm so happy you liked it. It's definitely something different than what I usually write.
Hahaha, I had this one girl on a different forum tell me "I get awkward when I pick out particular things in a boysecks scene, so let's just go with tres bien." lol. Anyway, thank you so much :3
This is wonderful, Em. Your way with words simultaneously astounds and pisses me off. Its not fair! >:P lol jk
It was definitely...ahem...steamy? For lack of a better word xD Yeah I'm not really sure what to say except, well, I love it. Like everything else you write, duh <3 ;)
July 24th, 2011 at 08:19am
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