Respirez Ces Mots - Comments

Such a great concept and story so far, it makes me sad to see that there's only two chapters. Definitely keep writing and uploading this. I'm hooked already.

Firstly, I love the layout. It's neat and simple and I've always been envious of people who can neatly make those banners and not look crappy. Plus, it's purple and I love purple lol.

Anyway, the story itself seems quite interesting. You're really descriptive with things, such as the atmosphere. I also really liked the way the first chapter was written. There were a few spelling and grammar errors that I spotted but we all make mistakes with writing.

Overall, I enjoyed the first two chapters and the story seems awesome so far. Keep up the good work!

This is really interesting :)
I cannot wait until you post the next chapter.

Poor Max :( Losing the one you love is never easy.
I cannot wait for what's in store.

Poor Max! I feel bad for him but I like the story so far.

I like this story, it has some awesome potential. Just make sure you check for some minor grammatical errors!=) Anyway, I love it keep up the good work! XD