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  • Miz Erie

    Miz Erie (970)

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    Hi, Sweetie!! As you say, it's you're lovely beta here! I can't wait to read more!!

    Love you!
    Miz
    July 26th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • operatic skeleton.

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    BBY I LOVE IT! Arms
    I know it's going to be good. I loved the concept from the beginning.
    I did notice a few grammar errors, so just check over for them next time. Or if you ever wanted I'd be willing. I love grammar. Well I don't love it, I just obsess over it. Cute

    That aside, I think this is going to be so good and I can't wait for more!
    -subscribes-
    July 26th, 2011 at 10:14pm
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