I don't know if you have any intentions of finishing this story, but OH MAN! You have to at least let us know if Matt is going to make it back in one piece or not! I finished this chapter and basically just died because of the suspense. Somehow I got really emotionally involved in this story! (:
I love this story and I really want to find out what happened to Matt!! Oh and by the way I love the way you write I have read every story you put up and I find you an awesome writer! Can't wait for more XD