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  • celinasmile

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    aww, i really like this! i like that it's so realistic at the same time. like, you've taken a completely different turn at his personality but yet it's so believable as a criminal minds fan. i could actually picture this being an episode, is what i mean hahah :) great work, keep it up! i'm excited for the weekend with nati's mother :) <3
    August 31st, 2011 at 08:33am
  • Gypsy Traveler

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    wow. wait. not really "finally", its only 6 chapters in but its good hes going to do his best to make it work.
    August 31st, 2011 at 08:06am
  • Gypsy Traveler

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    finally! boy is taking some initiative and being a man! lol
    August 31st, 2011 at 08:06am
  • celinasmile

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    "It even came out weird when he said it."
    i can just imagine spencer being "girllosoenfcobeofriendddddpsanoen". when i read that sentence, thats what came to mine XP but anywho, omg fucking spencer reid! i'm gonna slap this boy so hard. ugh. poor nati! :( btdubs, nati's really gorgeous :)
    okay, so anyway, LOVED it :) update again soon!!
    and now i am off to playing with fire! :D
    August 26th, 2011 at 08:49am
  • Gypsy Traveler

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    This is such a really cute story and I really like it. Im really interested in seeing how this entire story will pan out. I really love how you've captured the awkwardness that they sometimes share.
    August 26th, 2011 at 07:18am
  • celinasmile

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    i actually really REALLY like this story. in general, i'm not really a fan of stories where characters have babies and whatnot, but this is actually really great! i'm like DYING to know more about spencer and nati's relationship hahah :) say, do you have a picture of nati?? :D
    August 16th, 2011 at 05:41am
  • ontheedge91

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    can't believe no one has commented on this story. i love it! keep going.
    August 15th, 2011 at 04:41am