Linger On. - Comments

yes yes please PLEASE POST IT TONIGHT OMG

post it tonight! i love this story soo much!

John better get his foot out of his ass (I'm Red, see?) and march on over to Rebecca's and profess his love for her.

Sorry, Joel. He can have me instead :)

I can't wait to see who she's going to end up with. I want her with John really bad but there's a little part of me that totally wants her with Joel.

Johnecca?
Velasqaghan?
O'Callasquez?
Whatever. Forever Team John :D

I'm glad you're powering through since I really like the story and want to know how it ends.

this is no shit!!!it's amazing!
i loves the chapters and I love JOHN gfyreugeuihrguerhg john didnt show his love for Rebecca but at least he didnt cheat on her, Rebecca should reckon this. joel is really no better.
i want them to get together again (i mean john and becca)
love this, and im sad you lost interest in it but you still write great chapters.

Three chapters left?! It feels like it needs more, but you're the author. :P Damn, John! I was hoping he would be there to sweep her up, but he's still being an ass. I'm glad Joel feels real guilty. :) haha. But I gotta admit at least he still cares.

I would want John, too. Haha
I think Joel should have stayed home instead of going to to her soccer game because now she is probably mad at him for ruining her game too. Bahahahaha

At first I was like "Fuck yeah JohnOh for kicking Joel's ass!" and then he just kinda seemed like a douche when he still wouldn't call her >_< If he likes her so goddamned much he should tell her!

uggggh at this point I just hope that all of them are single or that she'll be with John like she's supposed to. Being single would be so great for all of them and give them all time to heal and stuff and things will get better!

She's still in love with John. I had a feeling she was. Joel is trying so hard to get back in her good graces (as he should) but I'm guessing she's going to end up with John in the end.

I am sad this story is close to being over, she better end up with John!

I don't know who I want to slap more, Joel or John.

I don't think john's an asshole at all, I just think he's a huge pansy. Boy don't know what the Hell he doin

that was nice of joel to go to the game i mean it shows that he still cares about her....
poor john though he is probably just sitting somewhere and drinking his weight...
cant wait for more <3

Dammit John!
Grow some balls already.
Joel is so in love with her, it's heartbreaking.
But she's always been hung up on John and he hasn't got the balls to ring her up.
Can't wait for more.

Asshole John. Stupid Joel. Stubborn/Heartbroken Rebecca. :| I kind of feel bad for Joel then I remember he cheated on her and then I just want him to leave, then there's John he like cares in his own way for Rebecca but usually makes him end up looking like a douche bag. Then finally poor Rebecca it's like everything is collapsing and just fucked up and of course the one person she's waiting for won't contact. And I can't wait for some explanation on that, but I'm sure John's playing the pity/drunk card and trying to give Rebecca some space. Hopefully, John and Rebecca find each other again....soon. :) haha Update soon, my dear?? <333

This chapter seriously made me cry.
How much pain Becca is in because of what Joel did.
And how much she felt so betrayed by finding out that he cheated on her the year before and she is only finding out a year later!
She is a complete mess because the moment she saw her mom, she just broke down because the one person she could count on is mother.
Joel and John getting into fights over Becca but they don't realize that won't anything but I guess letting out their not so likable feeling for each out is good.
But they both said is true; John will always be the douche bag ex-boyfriend while Joel will the ex-boyfriend that cheated on her.
They both dug their graves when Joel fucked another girl and when John didn't say anything about walking in on them.
So only three more chapter before this story comes to an end!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please update this soon! I really hope it will be John in the end