Screaming on the Inside - Comments

  • Crackwell Green

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    K. First thing's first;
    1: Carly is totes being a biznitch. For realsies.
    2: I feel bad for Jacky, he's so sweet ;(
    3: I know I've already said this 37283772 times, but OMFG NICK IS SO CUTIE. SRSLY HIM AND MARLEY IN THE PARK SINGING...AND THEN THEM OUTSIDE BEFORE SHE HAD TO GO HOME...
    -flails-
    THE CUTENESS!
    and imagining bb nick in footie pajamas and holding a stuffed squid...

    -explodes-

    Can't wait for the next chapter, sweets! <333
    September 24th, 2011 at 06:06am
  • OurDeal

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    I don't know why but I'm mad at Carly....and I wanna know what happens next! :D
    September 23rd, 2011 at 01:51am
  • eatmewhileimbri

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    Aww that was so cute.
    And it's horrible what carly is doing, trying to push them apart.
    But I can't wait for the next chapter and future ones, especially if you're stirring shit up. I like drama.
    September 22nd, 2011 at 08:54pm
  • Catch.The.Dream

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    This story is great. A great mix of the cute, fluffy stuff and still some pretty interesting drama. You aren't making it soo cliche either. You're actually making it pan out as if it were really happenig, which makes it great to read! I can't wait for more!
    September 22nd, 2011 at 05:17am
  • Vengeance_foREVer

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    I love this! I wish my boyfriend was like Nick but no Mason refuses to do anything nice for me LOL
    Update soon huney buney (:
    September 22nd, 2011 at 03:15am
  • Crackwell Green

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    CAN NICK BE MY BOYFRIEND OR...

    omfg. the cuteness.
    -flails-
    September 21st, 2011 at 05:18am
  • Vengeance_foREVer

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    Aw! I loved this update! Nick is so cute!
    September 21st, 2011 at 02:56am
  • eatmewhileimbri

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    Oh my god. The way you described the music like movies made me really happy for some odd reason. I can't explain it, but we won't question it and we'll just move on.
    This makes me extramly happy. Happy as in I want to run around dancing and singing like I'm in some sick twisted musical. (Yes it's a good thing)
    Just good lord. I can't get enough.
    September 20th, 2011 at 08:55pm
  • Crackwell Green

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    Nick. Is. Adorable.
    The end.
    He seems like such a good boyfrienddd!!! <333
    and I started laughing at the, "Way to go, Nick" part XDDD
    This was a really, really great chapter, and i cant wait for the next!! 8D
    September 20th, 2011 at 06:15am
  • Vengeance_foREVer

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    Beast Ass Story (:
    September 20th, 2011 at 01:30am
  • Johnny B

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    I really like this story :) Found it just today and I couldn't stop reading it. Update soon <3
    September 19th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • Crackwell Green

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    FUUUUUUUUCKING FINNNNNAAALLLLLLYYYYYY!!!!
    -claps like a seal- 8DDDDDDDD
    THEY BE ALL CUTIE AND ERRTHANG!
    I loved this <333 AND I LOVE YOU TOOOOO!!! <333
    September 19th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • Vengeance_foREVer

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    I'm speechless (:
    September 19th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • Vengeance_foREVer

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    Oh My God! I can't wait to read Nick's talk with Marley (:
    Update Soon -_-
    September 19th, 2011 at 02:40am
  • Vengeance_foREVer

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    Oh My God! I can't wait to read Nick's talk with Marley (:
    Update Soon -_-
    September 19th, 2011 at 02:40am
  • Crackwell Green

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    I literally squealed when I saw the email notification for this. :DDDDDD
    NICK IS SO CUTIE OMFG I CAN'T STAND IT. HE'S SO SWEET AND ADORABLE AND....-flails-
    And major awwwwwww! Marley wants a relationshippy <333
    AND OOOOOH HE WANTS TO TALK TO HER.....
    ABOUT HOW MUCH HE LOVES HER AND WANTS TO MAKES PRETTY LIL NICKY BABIES WITH HER?
    MAYBE?
    HUH? EH?
    -nudgenudgewinkwink-
    I can't WAIT for the next update!!! 8D
    September 17th, 2011 at 06:30pm
  • Crackwell Green

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    AHSKELDJJSKS PRAISE JESUS THIS HAS BEEN UPDATED
    September 17th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • Crackwell Green

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    I MISSSSSS THISSSSS <\3333333333
    September 12th, 2011 at 05:43pm
  • Katherine Wheel

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    Lol okay, I'll see what I can do. :) But I'm very sorry I couldn't post tonight, my sister decided to come over so I haven't had any time to actually post and it's now midnight, so I'll have to be really generous on the chapters tomorrow, and I'll def fix the font. THANK YOU!!! <3333 LOVE YOU
    August 15th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • Crackwell Green

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    OH! I REMEMBER WHAT I WAS GONNA SAY!
    I've been reading your fanfic on my itouch the whole time, and I just now read a chapter on my laptop, and I just thought I'd suggest making the font a bit bigger. Or a lot. It's really small. I even have my contacts in. :P
    teehee. just a tip, dearie!
    August 15th, 2011 at 02:19am