Caught Like A Fly - Comments

  • Haysay

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    Poor Jacky, He should've told her AHH. :( Update soon!
    November 8th, 2011 at 05:23pm
  • LadyWolverine0421

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    You are killing jacky!
    That poor boy.
    Update!
    November 8th, 2011 at 01:09pm
  • meowmix-

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    Lovely story :}
    Update soon pweaaaase aha.
    November 4th, 2011 at 07:28pm
  • Deadlihood

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    This was awesome! Jacky and Andy are sooo cute together :)
    November 3rd, 2011 at 11:33pm
  • Tiffany Purdy

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    Loved this chapter :) Update soon,please?
    November 3rd, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • Haysay

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    YAY, I loved it, when will she find out about that rainbow biach?
    November 3rd, 2011 at 05:31pm
  • IceNineKiller

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    hella cute. x3
    October 24th, 2011 at 02:29am
  • Haysay

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    Ok she really needs to beat up conner and rainbow head now! But I like!
    October 20th, 2011 at 05:51pm
  • goodbye.graceful

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    I felt bad for not updating and this was just too awesome of a chapter to hold back lol
    October 20th, 2011 at 08:58am
  • Deadlihood

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    Yay double update! The thought of Jacky soaking wet....holy hell is that a hot image.
    October 20th, 2011 at 06:36am
  • Deadlihood

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    Jacky needs to tell her about Conner so she doesn't feel guilty. I loved it, which is getting a little repetitive for me to keep commenting, but its true!
    October 20th, 2011 at 12:31am
  • Haysay

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    TELL HER ABOUT CONNER, GOOD UPDATE AHHH!
    October 19th, 2011 at 09:01pm
  • teenhearts

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    I love this chapter! I love how you used description when she's walking down the road and getting wet as fuck. and now I sound like my old English teacher, so I'm gonna shut up. write more soon! :]
    October 19th, 2011 at 06:26pm
  • Haysay

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    Wahoo, loved it like always :D
    October 18th, 2011 at 06:15pm
  • Deadlihood

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    Great, as usual :)
    October 18th, 2011 at 02:09am
  • Deadlihood

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    Great update! I can't wait until November when I get to see them live :)
    October 8th, 2011 at 12:59am
  • goodbye.graceful

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    I usually try to put obvious hints right away, but yeah, I reread that and it was confusing lol thank you!
    October 7th, 2011 at 06:53pm
  • LoserWithDreams

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    i love the soty! Only Thing...If you could put Who's POV it is That Would be Great cuz i got confused on the last part of the story!! Thank You!! Keep updating!! :)
    October 7th, 2011 at 02:47pm
  • Haysay

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    Please let that ally girl get hit by a bus, maybe falling in reverse's
    October 7th, 2011 at 10:35am
  • SilentEscape

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    I love this story! Please update ASAP :)
    October 2nd, 2011 at 10:13pm