The Hardest Part of Living - Comments

Don't mind me, just here because I missed your other stories :P

I fucking hate Christie. Love Mariah and you've written Gerard's character well. Your layout, as usual, is amazing, definitely love the banner! I absolutely love this! Update soon, dear!

Christy's such a fucking bitch i cant believe she hurt a child thats really low

I was sent here via comment swap :3

Okay, so the first thing I can say is that I'm not the biggest fan of the layout. As much as I love gazing at Gerard, the banner is slightly blurry, and the background doesn't gel well.

Onto the story! It's an MCR fanfic, so points for your story instantly, haha! Your description is really good, I absolutely love the first chapter! I don't like Christie, you've written her very convincingly as someone the audience is supposed to hate. Frank is too adorable, and I really like Mariah. Your storyline has obviously bee well-thought out and I quite like the idea, no matter how clichéd it seemed when I started reading. The only other issue I have aside from the layout is the lack of line breaks. Now, I used to do this myself, so this may be slightly hypocritical of me, but when you're starting a new paragraph, or a new line of dialogue, you should double-space, so that you leave small gaps between the lines. Not only is this correct grammar, but it makes it a lot easier to read the story, as, right now, it looks like the one massive block of text. I've only read through the first three chapters or so because of that issue, but seriously, keep up the good work, because his story is shaping up to be fabulous :)

oh wow i love this story!! i cant wait for more! I like the plot, you're really creative. if i was Mariah i'd cheat too, gerard is gorgeous! ;) haha but honestly i adore this story :) keep it up, and update this! frank is funny i like how they still ended up as a band. i hope gerard and mariah get together! ;)

Wow, almost forgot about this story. But soon as I clicked on to read the update, I remembered it straight away cause it is sooooo good! Aww poor mell, Mariah should be her new mom!!! Looking forward to more updates, so please please update soon xxx

Gah.
I'm just reminding you of that plan we discussed in Rainey's art class. :x
It would be hysterical xD Honestly.
And yep, i kept it cryptic so anyone reading this has no idea what the hell i'm talking about ;D

Awww he 'kinda' had sex with her lmao! She can't regret it that much, she said it was the best night of her life, so would she be happy to do it again and again? Awww its a shame how much Gerard misses her, I want them to be as close as they was before, yet this time more. I love this story, cannot wait to find out what happens next, xxx

Ohhhh Mariah is in trouble with Jared. Her and Gee belong togerther anyways.
So when is the next update?

Ugh yes! perfect I've been waiting! LOVED this chap.. I hope jared finds out that Mariah cheated on him with Gerard, so then hopefully Gerard and Mariah will end up together<33333

Aww
Poor Jared
Though I have a feeling Jared's going to cheat on her at the Bachelor party
I wonder how she's gonna react
You are now one of my favourite authors on here
:D

Awwwwwwwww :) That was sweet. Cannot wait to see how she reacts. x

This story deserves way more credit, it is brilliant!!! Although I would have liked their teenage years to have gone on a bit longer, but hey ho, I love reunion's anyhow, its just I found it upsetting that they never kept in touch I mean they were like in love with one another :( Gerard's daughter is so cute, I love how he was so happy to see Maria again, and how he was trying to ask her out, awww he must have felt so gutted when she told him she is married. :( I cannot wait to read what happens from here, please update soon I love it xxx

Hehe and the plot thickens sooooo much drama and poor Jared he's stick in the middle

i just LOVE jealous gee XD
seriously, give him a hard time, please! >:D

hm....that kiss was unexpected XD
it's like they like to torture themselves...

Whoa wasn't expecting that but I did kinda wanna cry w/ mariah :(

Awesome story

oh, nice story :D
i wanna know what happens at the guys' night :D :D
anyways, i like it that know he's getting the silent treatment :)

oh and P.S.

I JUST TOTALLY RAPED YOUR COMMENT BOARD OF ITS COMMENT-VIRGINITY!!!!!!

=D

Hmmmmmmm... intriguing.... I liked your description, and I see your sense of humour coming across, saying she looked like a hooker, then 'would you prefer if i said stripper' that made me chuckle!
I think... go into some depth about really why Mariah hates the girlfriend so much. I know its obvious... but like... yeah... from her point of view it isnt, if that makes any sense at alll?
Anyway, all in all, I liked it! Good job! :D