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  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I absolutely loved those 2 chapters :) Can't wait for the next update!
    February 19th, 2012 at 12:34pm
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    that was cute. FYI, you posted the Coffee chapter twice. loved it though and can't wait for more
    February 19th, 2012 at 08:10am
  • gcfansara1

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    LOVE LOVE LOVE the new part <3
    February 19th, 2012 at 05:20am
  • missann10

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    Love the update!
    February 19th, 2012 at 03:28am
  • soupy

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    Suck it up you two - it is now time to be happy for Sarah and Patrick and baby Avery. You can deal with your issues later.

    Personally, I think Bailey is carrying this a little far. Yes, she was hurt and angry by Jonny not telling her about the pregnancy scare, and she let him know it. He got that he screwed up by not telling her and he tried to apologize......what more can the guy do?

    But now that he illudes to the fact that he is done, she is upset. Bailey has to either forgive him and move on with him or hold the grudge and let him go. It doesnt mean she has to forget the pain - just let him know she is willing to work with him to get past it.
    February 19th, 2012 at 12:11am
  • gcfansara1

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    This story is amazing. I just read the whole thing in two hours. I love love love it :) Please continue :)
    February 17th, 2012 at 09:14pm
  • missann10

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    Why did she leave in the morning!!! Love the update and yay Sarah is having her baby :)
    February 17th, 2012 at 02:44pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    Good chapter, I'm just waiting to see what happens next!
    February 17th, 2012 at 08:21am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I only just got a chance to read this update. I'm really hoping they can sort it out. Can't wait for the next update.
    February 12th, 2012 at 04:26am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    Really interested to see what happens next!
    February 8th, 2012 at 12:42am
  • bublbabie

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    What is going to happen? Can't wait to find out
    February 7th, 2012 at 02:56pm
  • missann10

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    Ahh Jonny, I wonder what is going to happen between the two of them!
    February 7th, 2012 at 05:43am
  • soupy

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    MMMMM....wet jonny and roses....it doesnt get much better than that.
    February 7th, 2012 at 05:05am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I'm really interested to see where it goes from here, great chapter.
    February 6th, 2012 at 12:41am
  • missann10

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    This was very interesting, love the update and I can't wait to see where this all goes from here
    February 4th, 2012 at 07:45pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I don't know how she would forgive him for this... interesting chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
    February 4th, 2012 at 05:04am
  • bublbabie

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    more please.how is he possibly going to fix this mess? will she ever forgive him if he tries?
    February 4th, 2012 at 03:37am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    Oh no that doesn't sound good. Please update soon!
    February 4th, 2012 at 12:26am
  • Kaly18

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    Ouch that was cold in more ways than one
    February 3rd, 2012 at 09:48pm
  • missann10

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    Uh oh, what's going on? Update soon!!!
    February 3rd, 2012 at 04:46pm