Save Me - Comments

Dear author,

I read the prequel named ''Teach me'' and this one. The first book is about Annabelle's innocence and the comedy part while the second one is after three years where Anabelle has a whole new personality. She went down the road and it made the story more realistic if I may add. I didn't pic to read this because it was a fan fic ft. Justin Bieber but because of your interesting plot line.

When Annabelle caught Justin with Cassidy, I thought seriously wtf?! If that happened to me, I would never forgive him. I liked the fact she went with Murray because he was hot and why not? Justin had Cassidy even though she was cheating on him and it wasn't like Justin was Annabelle's boyfriend, so no harm sleeping with Murray. I think Justin wouldn't have had sex with Cassidy if he really wanted Annabelle, that's why I find it wrong that he breaks up with Cassidy after what, one day?! while yesterday they had sex?

I didn't like the fact that you skipped two months with Annabelle avoiding her boss, describing it would have added more to the story. I wanted to see more Murray in this.

At chapter 16, I liked the kiss Annabelle shared with Candy as they danced in front of Annabelles friends and Justin.

At chapter 21, I liked the end of it when Murray went to Annabelle's house to talk about them. What I didn't like was how Justin obeyed when Annabelle told him to go inside so she could talk with Murray. But I understand since Justin wasn't well emotionally at the time.

I enjoyed the levator situation at chapter 23.

Damn! I wasn't expecting that at chapter 24. Murray became strangely possessive.

At chapter 26, Murray's turned out to be a creep. I think he fits the role perfectly.

I loved chapter 28 even though it confused me and I liked the whole rescue plan. It added rush and action to the story.

I also realized something else. You have to change her name from AnnaBelle to Anna-Belle or Annabelle. And you have to edit the first book cause there were a bunch of writing mistakes (must have been from when you changed the plot line maybe).

That's all from me so bye. XD

~Marian.

Cool luv it!

Wow, just wow. I love this so much, and I love the way you ended it. Congradulations on this, it's amazing. <3

I loved it! This needs more recs!

This chapter was awesome!!!!! update soon!

Yayayays! She's saved! Can't wait for part two!

OKay, things are getting clearer now. I'm loving this chapter, and can't wait for the next. Update soon!

I love this so much.
Update asap! c:

@imjustinlove
you didn't skip anything, i will fill in the blanks in the next chapter so it'll be easier to understand. i promise!

I feel like I skipped a chapter. It jumped from wasabi and sex to locked in a basement, am I missing something? Either way, good chapter, suspence!!!! Update soon!!

:( oh no

Lol good!! Maybe i can get rid of mine!

@ poohladii55
I KNOW! i had hella writer's block, but i got rid of it! and love you too!

About time you updated hoe!!!!!!!

You serious need to finish this story, its amazing!! Ugh I love it and you're a great writer! :)

Great chapter, can't wait for more drama! Update soon!

i like it i read the prequal before i read this :) your a good writer update soon

So Im pissed u never told me of this ENTIRE story both prequel n sequel n Im one of ur besties Im loving ur ass but i liked it so write more love or ima throw Sherbert at chu lol

Awesome, go ahead and leave me hanging. Update! And I think it's funny how everyone makes outfits for girls but not guys. Haha, can't wait for the next chapter

bitch...wtf...Jerry really?