I don't listen The 69 Eyes, but it seems to me like this is semi-true? I dunno! It just seems like it to me. I liked how you wrote out the setting a lot. I don't really know if it related to the song all that much, but I really liked how it was written and how you described the characters in it. There were a few errors, but no biggie. I liked the main character :) Good luck with the contest :)
September 27th, 2011 at 07:46am
