Write more or I'll stalk you. I'm not kidding...well maybe I am kidding but that's only because I don't know where you live or anything. WRITE MOREEEE!!!!!!!! now.
I don't know who these two people are but I like your story so far. Your writing is easily understood yet complex in its structure. You set up this character pretty well in this chapter, made his motives clear. I can't wait to heR more about Nike. :3
