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  • morshu101

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    First there are a few mistakes that are quite amusing, his hair was in angels not in angles and was his hair blue because that would make sense but otherwise oxidized penny might not be the best idea of a hair color. Other than that the story really seams vivid and real which makes the story great.
    June 8th, 2012 at 10:44pm
  • boyking

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    signing onto mibba every few months is always worth it for you fantastic as fuck writing. i love you, and miss you.
    October 28th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • Tongue Tied Ideas.

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    Jeez, that was terrifying but it justified the prompt so I love it. :)
    October 19th, 2011 at 04:51pm
  • Starry.Eyed

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    I love this. It was amazing (:
    And Caleb sounds so cute. hehe
    October 10th, 2011 at 12:40am
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

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    Lisa holy fuck that was so terrifying and oh my god Caleb and JACKSON D:
    Seriously, if anyone ever tries to drag me out to a barn in the middle of the woods, they can go fuck themselves. Scariest shit ever. And fuck cows.

    Ugh. I loved this. I really hope you do great in the contest! :)
    October 7th, 2011 at 01:32am
  • Yuurei.

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    Whaaaaaaat? Ahhhh. That was really good, thank you for your submission!
    The only problem for me was that the font size was a little hard to read, but no big deal!
    Good luck~
    October 3rd, 2011 at 07:39pm
  • demented_rockstar

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    ohhhhhhhh I really really loved it!!!!
    ahhh so well written, I enjoyed it fully :D <2+1

    JAzz <2+1
    October 1st, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • NeverShoutPhil

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    D: ohmygod.
    October 1st, 2011 at 08:16pm
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