Crocodile - Comments

I thought of this earlier and was like, I HAVE TO RE-READ IT! So I did!!! I love it just as much now, if not more, than I did when I originally read it!!!!! You my dear, are my favorite author of all things dark and suspenseful and twisted storylines. I am going to have to re-read a lot of things, it's been forever it seems! Just wanted to let you know, that being from Louisiana, I think you did a FANTASTIC job on this. It was clever and well-written and spot on fucking perfect :3

They killed him! Noo!
That was.. Weird yet amazing.
You, my dear mibbian, are one of my favourite authours. :D

Woah! Whell...that was...AWESOME! I totally didn't expect it!

wow.wow.wow.
that was unexpected!
great twist

:D i live n a louisiana:D
idk i just though id sharee

Flippin' heck, that was awesome! Fantastic twist =D

Oh...My...Mikey.
That was so delightfully twisted that I am...speechless.
I guess the one thing I can say is
Bravo.

that was really smart
and really kinda sad too
i liked it =]

I give you props for writing a ferard set in Louisiana, but there's only alligators there not crocodiles.. Also because I used to live in New Orleans I know that the newspaper there is the Times Picayune. Other than that your story was amazing =D

holy shit.....
frankie is so cool when he is evil... i cant beleive he killed gee

damn!?!?!????

sheesh hott and evil
the perfect mix
love this!

holy didnt see frankie doing that to gee

LOL!!

I've got no idea whats happening but I'm laughing this fanfic was so weird and so funny, I'm not too sure why it's so funny.

I really didn't expect Frank to throw Gerard 'away' like that...but that made me laugh more.

Well done I love it.

holy fuck...i did NOT expect that...just...holy fuck...and i'm quite in awe...major brownie points!!! and...i think that poor zach is going to be in for quite the shocker...Oo

twaz a very nice oneshot, and i'm quite impressed with it! great job!

Lawl.
When I read the ending, my mouth literally just dropped open.
That was nice. :]

O_O
Dude. You have got to be one of my favorite writers...wait. scratch that. You ARE my favorite writer on Mibba. ^_^
Yer just so durn creative. xD
I never would have thought a story could be so hot and shmexy yet so disturbing.

When Frank was all "Follow me" I realized he was gonna kill him....

The second after I realized how....

DAMN!!!

That was awesome!!! It was a big twist!!!

dude,
this amazes me.
He gets eaten by crocidilessss.... WEIRD.

In an odd mood, I see...

OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was the most original, unique, mind-blowingly amazing story I think I have EVER read. You are easily one of the best authors on mibba, and I absolutely adore your writing.

This story, simply blew my mind.
You're a genius.

May I ask - are you from the Louisiana area? I'm intrigued, because like Frank in this story, I too live in Louisiana... so it's always fun when someone puts LA in their stories.

*Edit: Page claim! I shall call it... Don't Feed the Crocodiles. Hahaha!*