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love this update soon please

Heya, just finished the latest chapter, it was well good! I loved the drama of her pushing Damian away and then the whole flashback was brilliant and the swear words used at certain points in the story really captured the atmosphere and made it more true to life. And I loved the little realisation at the end that she was in love with Damian. Great stuff!!! I can't wait to read more :) xx

just read the first ten chapters and I really liked them. Funny moment= Damian in the Superman boxers lol. And chapter 8 and 10 were very good, as you've clearly grown as a writer since the beginning of the story, particularly in chapter 10, you had such detailed description!!! And it's really cool that Hayley actually is a dancer for Celtic Thunder. Also, I loved the way that you litterally dived into the pregnancy drama, kept me captivated from the start. And I think it's brilliant how you've managed to write a lot about the pregnancy, I have a lot of trouble sticking to one subject, but you've done it brilliantly and looked at all the different outcomes and thoughts etcetera.... Can't wait till the next chapter and you should definitely do more chapters in Damian's Point of view because that's definitely when your writing reaches it's full potential as you are able to describe everything going more so than you do with Hayley. Also, loved it when Sharon fainted lol!!! And I loved the little flashback in chapter 8, have you got anymore storylines concerning the rapist coming up, like he makes a sudden return or something? Because that would be cool. And this is turning out to be a really long comment, so anyway, I loved it and thank you fro introducing me to your story. Also, I love how each chapter isn't too long, it makes it easier for the reader to read. So well done!!! :) xx

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LOVE CHAPTER 10!

nice i like it keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay! So,I know I'm a co writer, but GAHHHHH! This was so good! Way better than the 300 words I came up with! I love the whole sibling connection between Keith and Hayley, CUTE!

cooolliooo continue and try to read my stories!

lol. yes. Haley is real. She was a dancer for Celtic Thunder during It's Entertainment. Not sure if she still works for them though. Thank you for the comment! :D

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great story sooo far!!!!! lov the layout is Hayley supposed to be reallll is that her in the picture???????

luv ya
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