I really Ikethis story! It's entertaining and very interesting to see a fan writing a story! It's lovely! I love the way you write it, just I'm sad that it isn't finished! Anyway, incredible story!
I really do love this story, it's interesting and you don't see a lot of mysterious companion stories. You could put in more detail about the character instead of putting it in the page, people want to see the imagery. Anyway, I absolutely love it, so please update soon, and check out my own Doctor Who story, I think you might enjoy it (:
i loved the update and sorry for not commenting earlier i was in the middle of moving and i got a new job (i practically live at my job i'm there so often) but i love how you were able to bring out the emotions of the characters
ive never read a story like this before... deffently interesting.
i like the personalitys in the story. one thing that i do have to critizise is that it is hard for me to keep up in what is going on in the story. it feels like there is alot of confersation and not alot of what may be going on in her head... try to add some thoughts of her's.. besides that i love what the story is about!!!! \
Anyway, I read your story :o Wow. You... Are... Frickin... Amazing!!! The writing is so detailed, You've made me adore your characters, (Well i've always liked David Tennant as The Doctor, but moving on). Chapter 2... Like Renavelia said, It's so disgusting that people do that... And it was very explicit with what the drunk idiot actually said... I'm not saying that the literal writing wasnt good. Just that part made me cringe. And I love your character so much, if those guys were actually real... They would have to deal with me, as well as The Doctor throwing them into a black hole. I would tell you my torture methods, but it would take too long. I always get so wound up about stuff like this ;) Okay, so that is all I have to say, its phenomenal, I love it, I have subscribed, and update!!! :D
Yay! I was finally able to finish reading the new chapter. At first I was on my laptop and them it crashed. I was all shocked and wided eyed. I was stunned and couldn't move. Then I frowned. I can't believe that I lost everything on my laptop. All of my stories, pictures, music. Everything.
Anyways, I loved this update. It was very informing of Alexis stature. I loved the part where she yelled "BUT WE'LL BE MARRIED!" Lol.
Can't wait for an update and for the romance to start. XP
Hey I love this story I think you have the Doctor down in his personality and mannerisms are like they are on the show please continue and just to say this so totally made my day