The Bear - Comments

Hey! What's up? I haven't read/commented one of your stories in forever, man!
I'm intrigued by this story already. I believe I will subscribe and try to keep up with it. I love bears, and I especially love polar bears. Plus, I'd like to know what the deal was with the prologue! What the heck happened to Brinly? And what's the deal with the talking bear?? Honestly, you had me at "talking bear".
As CallusedSilk said, you had a few minor errors, but overall your writing is good.
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I really like this story so far. Although I noticed a couple errors in the first chapters, mostly superficial stuff like writing release instead of released and the funniest one being wanting tree kids instead of three kids. xD

i love polar bears! they r so cute! Anyway i can't wait for the next chapter.

More more more! Ok girl i need more of this story, u can't leave me hanging here.