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  • teenage hearts

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    This was so good. Not even joking, this was completely flawless. I don't even know the right words to describe this...everything about this, the concept, the idea, the way they interact, everything was just brilliant. Mr. Green
    January 25th, 2013 at 05:48am
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    The writing is completely wonderful. You are an amazing writer. This was funny, sweet, breathtaking, and magnificent!
    January 20th, 2013 at 07:43am
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    That was so damn cute! It was hilarious as well. The bit with Belle's dad asking if Oli peed on her had me laughing for quite a while.
    January 27th, 2012 at 04:18am
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    Aww, this was so cute!
    January 16th, 2012 at 06:26am
  • harrystyles

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    This was... completely perfect in every way. No words.
    November 20th, 2011 at 02:53pm
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    THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you SO much for writing this <3
    October 29th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • skyerocket.

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    I enjoyed reading this, a lot. Even though I know like next to nothing about Oliver Sykes I found that I was drawn into this story. I liked how he was 'ugly' or a 'monster' in the inside instead of appearance. Because when someone is so mean and harsh they really can appear ugly on the outside too. Or at least, it's always been that way for myself.
    I loved that Belle was such a strong character as well. She really could hold her own.

    Great job. :)
    October 26th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • Earl Of Slander

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    Jesus Christ you're good.
    I should be writing for FIA but instead I'm here looking at all your stories and this one was just magnificent. I'm on the verge of crying; you portrayed Oliver so well in a way that I've never seen before. Sure, he's been written as a real asshole (and some people even agree that he IS a real asshole) but I've never seen it done like this. And how it relates to Beauty and the Beast, I absolutely loved it. Please tell me that you won that contest because I don't see how anyone could do better than this.
    October 25th, 2011 at 08:07am
  • raja sahara

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    HOLY CRAP, THIS WAS AMAZING.
    Despite the fact that I barely know who Oliver Sykes is, I LOVED HIM IN THIS. I really liked who well you did Beauty and the Beast. It worked out SO WELL, and I looooooved it, Cecilia. Annabelle is so cute! She's a good character and she was a very good 'Belle'.
    I also liked you you didnt make this so cheesy. Sometimes, these stories can turn out to be cheesy, but it wasn't!

    GREAT JOB! :)
    October 24th, 2011 at 04:37am
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    I really liked it!!:) See? I read it as I told you and I could not comment it. It was very nice of him to pay everything, and I love Beauty and the Beast too :)
    October 23rd, 2011 at 09:27pm
  • americanmouth

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    i loved thi entire thing; i cried throughtout most of the second and third chapters. im such a love sap, but this was wonderful c:
    October 21st, 2011 at 07:52pm
  • NeverShoutPhil

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    This is really nice. I personally didn't like the picture of Oli you chose, but again, that's just me. Apart from that, this is beautiful (:
    October 21st, 2011 at 07:49pm
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    sigh that was great omg i loved it asfjakfda i loved how you managed to make it seem like beauty and the beast without it being too fantasy/fairy tale-ish :D
    October 21st, 2011 at 03:17pm
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