Feel The Heartbeat In My Mind. - Comments

I was not trying to murder... just make you really really bloated with cookies :D
I loveddddd this chapter! :DDDDDDD

So, this comment is to fulfill a prize for miss Bree_Vee_Vengeance for the On-The-Spot contest. This story has potential. It's good and I can see it going places. Keep up the good work with it. I will continue to read because it does grab my interest. I want to know if Brian will finally give Aria a chance at some point. I also want to know more about Petra and why she meant so much to him. So, with that being said, great work! Love it and please continue.

Hmmmmm I see like a burden in this story
'HE ISSSSS NOT WORTH IT DUMP HIM'
Awww soooo mean, I have my reasons -cough- car crash -cough-

Update! I want to know what happened!

I love this!

Question: Is this going to be a full length story or a one shot/two shot/etc?