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  • funnynaura

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    How could make an ending like this -3-
    April 26th, 2012 at 04:20pm
  • almostnurin

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    fixed it ;)
    October 27th, 2011 at 04:58pm
  • funnynaura

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    how could you didnt tell me about this story..................... -3- i think you should fix the POV, I found some POV mistakes in chapter 4 and 5 :)
    October 27th, 2011 at 04:24pm
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