Obsidian - Comments

Woah.... this is beautiful. I really loved it. The way you wrote this is wonderful.

I really enjoyed this. I really really enjoyed this. I love mental illness fic and you handled it so damn well.

“What God would send me, right?” That line really hit me. Like wow. I don't even have words.

The imagery (and I know this is such an overused line, but oh my god) is beautiful and hurty and those last 3 lines cut to the bone in the best possible way.

Just, yeah. Wow.

I thinks I has to agree with Fun Bunny Ra-Ra...

i really enjoyed that O.o

I love you. =}
You have a way with words, and concepts that I can only DREAM of having....Thank you for gracing this earth and my computer screen with your ideas, words, and talent : )

Nice!! I loved how you started with the snow and ended with it. It's ironic that this has the silent-snow theme, because the chapter I just wrote for death is black and white has the same theme O.o I didn't know anyone else had that same opinion!!

Nevertheless, you did a great job with this(: I'm not one for sex scenes, but I still liked it!! Nice job!

DUDE! I quite enjoyed that. Gore is something so wonderful... :P No joke i love stories with gore in them and a darker story line!
This was really good. I loved the characters and especially how you used the song in the story!
You're an amazing writer dude and the plot was intense!
so yeah I sort of really kinda loved this :D
<3