I realllllly hope you keep this one going! I know it's hard sometimes, getting writer's block and life, but still. I really have enjoyed this story, I hope you keep it going (:
@ Brian Haner Jr Thanks! That's what I try to go for when I write stories especially ones with fighting scenes. I mean the guys can only do so much so the ones fighting will be the girls if at most lol like robin, Jessa and doutzen.
Yes Jessa is a total badass and i love her for that.
@ HanerJoy I promise to update. I usually do on Christmas Day so hopefully I can. My family is a bit weird and only celebrate Christmas Eve and then the actual day we just chill lol
@ Brian Haner Jr Trust me writing this story after a long hiatus was weird for me lol I got back into the swing of things. Just need to keep going. Oh yes. Sometimes the dragging out turns into disappointment when the climax is revealed. I'm just nervous about the potential fight scenes. I'm horrible at those and my fingers don't fly as fast when it comes to that type of stuff. No I didn't kill off Jessa. What I meant was she wasn't detained like the rest of the without a fight. Since elders can easily control any vampire beneath them it was pretty easy detaining everyone except Jessa since she's still considered a newborn. So because of her rash personality she swing a few punches...let's say her results of what she did will come out in the next chapter.
Cheers :D It feels odd to be back here haha. And fair enough. I get where you're coming from, not wanting to drag stuff out. I wish a lot more people understood that just because it's long, doesn't meant it's good haha.
Wait.... you said "didn't go down without a fight." Are you killing Jessa off? D:
@ Brian Haner Jr First off, welcome back! I have done so much in so little time. I didn't want to stretch things out to the point where it's like where are the elders going to be at and I was getting tired of writing about Doutzen's pregnancy lol not one of my strong suits. I don't think you missed anything haha I just fast forward a lot.
I was going to explain it in the next chapter, sort of but I guess i can say it here. Each council member(s) took the time to devise some sort of plan to detain each vampire so the leader had Doutzen and the others dealt with Syn and the rest of the gang. So that's why they didn't hear Aurora and the servants wouldn't do shit because they wouldn't even want to go up against elders.
If I remember correctly her strength is slowly decreasing since it has been months now. She still packs a powerful punch, but her downfall is her bloodlust and I can say they used that against her along with a elder who has special powers that enabled her to really do anything to them. For baby vampires...I don't know what I am going to do with that whole lifestyle. She is going to breastfeed, she won't be drinking blood for a while and Jessa's type of newborn...she didn't go down without a fight lol
@ MoMo_92 Yep they took her child. I actually planned on having Jessa or doutzen actually running away with aurora but I found this a bit more dramatic. Idk why but I always tend to see what Meyers did with Breaking Dawn and bad Volutri scene and doing the opposite because we all know it was complete shit. I need some action or something. There will be chaos and there will be blood I can say that much.
@ ErinIntensity So sorry for the late posts. They are so scattered and right when I hit my stride I tend to back down to take a breather which isn't the best since I lose my muse that way lol hopefully I type up at least the verdicts for each vampire before I take a break if needed lol
I am all caught up and so confused right now hahaha I don't know if it's because my eye is like, literally non-stop tearing up on me or I've missed something, but holy fuck shit hit the fan fast.
THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY!
How did no one else hear the baby crying? Why was no one even with the poor thing? Worst vampires ever haha.
And if newborns can't be controlled, surely the best vamp to have around is Jessa? I can't remember exactly how you've set up your newborns, whether they are stronger or weaker or what not, but surely they'd want Aurora with someone who can control themselves above everything else? Not that it matters being that she's now MIA and the hurt is being put on D. Which, how is no one hearing what's going on? Worst vampires ever hahahahaha just kidding.
@ MisfitCarter We all have those moments of freaking out haha Thank you. It just stuck with me and even though the others names are beautiful I just love Aurora. Quinn is slowly coming around with a bit of Doutzen helping, a nice change given she fought to be away from the coven so much in the first place.
Ohmergerd! Too freaking cute! I love it so much! My boyfriend is making fun of me because I got excited. I love the name! It's beautiful and I'm so happy that Doutzen finally accepted the baby. And Quinn! Ah! I need more soon!