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  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    So wait is this story over ???
    December 22nd, 2012 at 10:05pm
  • barnes bucky.

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    I'm finally catching up on a bunch of stories, so I didn't get to read the full chapter before it got deleted. :( I loved this story so much, it was perfect :)
    May 30th, 2012 at 10:06pm
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    So, I'm trying to find a way to apologize for being so late with the reading and commenting.
    I AM SO FUCKING SORRY DARLING!
    It has been a rough period of time, with the new job, the studying and other stuff and i didnt have the time to check properly your updates and im so sorry about it
    i hope you don't hate me :/ i just finished this story and now im about to read the others
    i hope you'll understand
    you're still my fave of course
    and i loved how you ended the story, i dont get how raveena had second thoughts on julian tho.
    garrett FTW!
    May 8th, 2012 at 07:12pm
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    FUCK MIBBA! I love this story :)
    April 30th, 2012 at 03:58am
  • MYP

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    Awww I'm so sad that this is done! I loved this story, and I thought the short and sweet ending was quite perfect for them. They're whole relationship was drama filled with Raveena trying to get over Julian, and getting back together with him. Bleh. So the short, sweet and happy ending was perfect! Haha. I'm definitely going to miss those two though!
    April 18th, 2012 at 03:50am
  • raja sahara

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    If this doesn't show up, I will hunt down whoever is in charge of this site and take a machete to his head because it's going to be long.

    Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much. This sounds so cheesy but I actually love you for asking me to be in your story. I will always love reading it and whenever you ask if anyone wants to be in a story, I always wonder what it would be like to see my name everywhere and I like died when you asked me ahaha. Aaaaand it's Garypoo! This ending was hella short but it was cute nonetheless! I love this plotline. Like it's not the most original plot, but it's not the most cliche either. You made it very you, basing it off your own life and I really loved that.

    I want to cry because now this story is over. I'm glad I still got dibs and I'll make sure to pick the best guy for me next time but my ultimate dibs will forever be Garrett Nickelsen, deal? Mind you, it might be a while until your next Garrett story, but just gonna remind you that I belong to him ;)
    Just kidding hahaha. But I'm still sad. So just know that you da best, I love you forever and ever, and we've still got our Arizona boys to cheer us up over this stupid ass crash. MIBBA, GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER.

    Okay. I'm done. My heart is breaking, but I'm done. <3
    April 17th, 2012 at 12:28am
  • erika_xtc

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    *squeals* I'm sososososo happy that they're together again and Julian isn't in the picture anymore!
    April 16th, 2012 at 10:56pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    Are this story and Shimmer completed? 'Cause I seriously can't remember.
    April 16th, 2012 at 10:50pm
  • HeyCaam!

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    OH MY GOD! Why the timing in the stories is always so fucked up? Why she arrived to his house when the girl was walking out!
    but jashkjasd this is amazing, and for the next story, I vote for JohnOhhh :D
    April 5th, 2012 at 01:22am
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    OMGGGG I MISSED THIS STORY SO MUCH!
    im so sad its going to end soon.
    i loved the chapter tho!
    April 4th, 2012 at 04:24pm
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    I'm glad she is coming to her senses. Now it's Garrett's turn to make things right. Looking forward to the next update.
    April 4th, 2012 at 09:13am
  • bleucheese

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    A John O'Callaghan story would be nice!

    I love this story :))
    i don't want it to end!!
    April 4th, 2012 at 06:02am
  • xstoriesyettounfoldx

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    djnsvueirjkndfvhiujrke I HAD SO MANY CHAPTERS TO CATCH UP ON. I have no idea why tumblr stopped sending me messaged that you were updating, but it did and I'm PISSED AS HELL. Except now I had something to read. GOD MY HEART GOT PULLED IN SO MANY DIRECTIONS. First happy because Garrett and Raveena were somewhat together, then sad, then happy, then WHY THE FUCK IS JULIAN BACK, then cjknsvhgerujbkntfg. Currently scjhkvbghuwjerknbtr. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER JUST TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. God, I missed this story!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 09:54pm
  • hearyoume

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    A JOHN STOOOORY!!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 07:21pm
  • soonerorlater

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    Oooh everyone's voting on here so me too: Either a John or Max story. Or a Garrett story, since this one is nearly ending. :>

    Omg this chapter. Sorry Julian but she loves Garrett. Update soon please!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 01:32pm
  • badluckcharm

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    A Max story!

    Or Harry...

    Ugh can't decide hahaha.
    April 3rd, 2012 at 12:48pm
  • CarCrashHearts

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    I dont want this story to end!!
    Another John Ohh story!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 10:24am
  • zackyVplz

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    so ive been mibba MIA for awhile and ive just started reading again and this story is AMAZING!!! cant wait tfor the next update your charactors just get better and better !!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 09:29am
  • Caitosaur.

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    First order of business: John O'Callaghan.
    Always.
    Secondly, the latest update says "god offal dress," I'm assuming you meant awful but I'm kind of in my grammar/spelling nazi shock/horror stage right now.
    April 3rd, 2012 at 09:28am
  • amyytwloha

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    There aren't enough max stories do a max one :)
    April 3rd, 2012 at 09:28am