Deception - Comments

Damn now I ship her with Adrian!! I hope she ends up with him. Though a part of me wants her to end up with Draco too, but he kind of pisses me off here sometimes.. he's hot and cold. One moment he shows signs of having a deep liking for her and then the next it's him being selfish again. I hope you become inspired and update this soon again oh pleaseeeee

Oh poor Amara darling. Still love this story and I can't wait to see it all the way through. Her and Malfoy... It's so wonderful yet, you can't help but hate him a little bit. Those pesky Slytherins. I would love it if Amara finally came out and stated that she was actually...Amara! But that seems pretty much impossible at the moment. I'm glad there's going to be a sequel. Amara and her plans are always delicious to read.
So glad you're still updating this story!! Love love love it!

This chapter left me absolutely speechless. Wow, I'm so shocked I'm struggling with what to say now, lol.
There are so many conflicting thoughts. But knowing you, you've always been able to make your readers feel that way. Like, I adore Amara's character. She's so realistic, yet so difficult to relate to, because you don't know what she's thinking.
One chapter I'll believe her feelings for Malfoy are going to complicate the plan and the next chapter I can see her throwing him aside and I just can't anticipate her motives. It makes for a really gripping story, tho!
Thank you for the update! And it's really funny, you've said I've inspired you to write again when really YOU inspired ME! Haha, anticipating the next. I'm too hooked.
I can't ship Amara and Adrian tho, no matter how sweet he's been to her, she already has so many complications and Malfoy's already so jealous as it is. :p

This was the first story I read when I came back.
I was hooked immediately. Amara is such a badass.
And I love how there's so many sinister thoughts behind the person she pretends to be.
You've always been a brilliant writer! Hope to see more from this or Betrayal soon. <3

Update soon plz! :)

This is a great story and I would defiantly like to see more of it but I see it's been two months hopefully you'll pick this story back up. It's a very good read. :)

Oh they family seen was so melancholic, thanks for updating!

I'm so glad you updated! YAY!! This is one of my favorite stories on Mibba and I can't wait for more!!!! More update please!!!!!!

I spent the last two days reading this so I could catch up. I have to say I really enjoy this so far. It's not like most other HP fanfictions you find on mibba. Great job!:D

Thanks for updating!

such a good story

Wow I miss all these stories I wish it never ended. Thanks for the quick update :)

I love this story so mucha nd I really like Amara. Thanks for updating <3

another amazing chapter! I still love how Amara is in the background of all these things. It's so exciting!
Please update soon :)

You updated!! I was so happy and excited to see that. You have no idea. I loved it as always. I can't wait until you update again. No matter how long it takes, I'll be waiting :)

Thanks for the update (:

can you imagine my shock when I saw this updated?
I thought this died.
I thought you died (well, off Mibba. I see u on tumblr ;))
and omg seeing all the stuff that happened in OotP is making me so nostalgic and sad because it's been so long since I've read Harry Potter. I WANT TO CRY. but I love how Amara fits perfectly in the background of it all. You're probably not gonna update this for another year so should I even say 'update soon?''
:D

Wonderful chapter !!!

I actually really enjoy this story, it's very well written and thought out. I hope you get around to updating it soon, as I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens.

Aw they're so cute together. This chapter was definitely just cute. I'm glad you finally updated! I missed this story a lot.