So Take Your Hand In Mine, It's Ours Tonight - Comments

I also loved the prequel.
And I will admit that no, I don't like the human torture scenes or anything like that. But I love the concept of Dom/fertile so I ignore those bits and focus on the love story.

I also loved the prequel.
And I will admit that no, I don't like the human torture scenes or anything like that. But I love the concept of Dom/fertile so I ignore those bits and focus on the love story.

I also loved the prequel.
And I will admit that no, I don't like the human torture scenes or anything like that. But I love the concept of Dom/fertile so I ignore those bits and focus on the love story.

I also loved the prequel.
And I will admit that no, I don't like the human torture scenes or anything like that. But I love the concept of Dom/fertile so I ignore those bits and focus on the love story.

I also loved the prequel.
And I will admit that no, I don't like the human torture scenes or anything like that. But I love the concept of Dom/fertile so I ignore those bits and focus on the love story.

I also loved the prequel.
And I will admit that no, I don't like the human torture scenes or anything like that. But I love the concept of Dom/fertile so I ignore those bits and focus on the love story.

I also loved the prequel.
And I will admit that no, I don't like the human torture scenes or anything like that. But I love the concept of Dom/fertile so I ignore those bits and focus on the love story.

I also loved the prequel.
And I will admit that no, I don't like the human torture scenes or anything like that. But I love the concept of Dom/fertile so I ignore those bits and focus on the love story.

So yeah. I love this story.

So yeah. I love this story.

So yeah. I love this story.

So yeah. I love this story.

Of course you don't.

Of course you don't.

Totally just read this again.
PLEASE update soon or I'll die! o.o
No. I really will. You don't want that do you?

Yahhhh, they finally touched lips <3

I was this as updated and I was like, oh yay! At least that's what I thought, literally.
But they kissed omg! :D

great update. can't wait for more. update soon please

Oh, coupely couple stuffs.
SO CUTE.
Love this story so much and your original characters are brilliant. They have a really amazing depth to them that i just love.
I cannot wait for more and am all excited over the kiss. Also feeling kinda sorry for the guys on the swings but only because i don't know if they were young or old.

absolutely love your story <3 you definitely need to update soooon i mean like NOW i want to read more!